Decided to start writing a hentai fic. However, it’s based on Space Pirate Sara (it’ll be her and Sylvia and a whole tribe of the lizard men from the second episode), so it’s not very Inyouchuu-like beyond the belly bulging cocks, so I won’t post much about it beyond this.

I will say it amused me that in creating narrative context for the lizard gangbang, the smut fic with tags like All Holes Filled and Breeding Kink is also about anti-colonial freedom fighters.

Mostly I'm just noting this because once I finish this, I'll probably move on to one of several more forum relevant fic ideas.

(06-21-2026, 01:38 PM)lonesomebro Wrote: Decided to start writing a hentai fic. However, it’s based on Space Pirate Sara (it’ll be her and Sylvia and a whole tribe of the lizard men from the second episode), so it’s not very Inyouchuu-like beyond the belly bulging cocks, so I won’t post much about it beyond this.

I will say it amused me that in creating narrative context for the lizard gangbang, the smut fic with tags like All Holes Filled and Breeding Kink is also about anti-colonial freedom fighters.

 also if you or Echelon V have any advice on writing smut scenes id really appreciate it, i guess i won't know how it goes until i try it, but im worried i won't be good at writing the H-scenes even though id like to have some in my inyouchuu fanfics.

(06-21-2026, 05:39 PM)Suiisbestgirl Wrote:

(06-21-2026, 01:38 PM)lonesomebro Wrote: Decided to start writing a hentai fic. However, it’s based on Space Pirate Sara (it’ll be her and Sylvia and a whole tribe of the lizard men from the second episode), so it’s not very Inyouchuu-like beyond the belly bulging cocks, so I won’t post much about it beyond this.

I will say it amused me that in creating narrative context for the lizard gangbang, the smut fic with tags like All Holes Filled and Breeding Kink is also about anti-colonial freedom fighters.

yoooo! at least link it somewhere here where i can read it! Space pirate sara was probably one of the first hentai I ever saw(i remember the first one was 15 bishoujo hyouryuki, before that i had just seen some ecchi stuff like the kissxsis OVAs(still really hot) and Yamadas first time B gata H kei), back when i would watch anime on my PSP lol. I really liked the loli twins that grew dicks and started having fun with Sara and the other girl, and then i think later they got their revenge on them by doing stuff to them as well later on?

 also if you or Echelon V have any advice on writing smut scenes id really appreciate it, i guess i won't know how it goes until i try it, but im worried i won't be good at writing the H-scenes even though id like to have some in my inyouchuu fanfics.

I'll let you down now by letting you know my fic will not have futa (well, technically it does at the start when the lizard men first rescue/abduct Sara and Sylia because they still have dicks from the twin's meddling, but then the tribe will use their own drugs to reverse that transformation in favor of amplifying fertility)

Not sure where I'd begin with how to write the smut scenes, haha. I used to RP on some places years ago and I think that aided in my knowledge of it. And just consuming hentai for years and years. But yeah I think lonesomebro has the right idea, try to study those parts in VN's, your favorite fanfics, or imagine just watching and seeing a scene, but describing it. It might be to a fault I'm so overly descriptive, but people like that sexy scenes so I try to go all in, but then the pacing can be a bit slow. So everyone has their own style. I usually come through my ideas several times through to proof read, remove, or add to them as well. I still have a lot to learn myself, it's easy to describe the physical action going on for me, but the dialogue and psyche in between is challenging.

What do we know about Yoru? hes like a cat spirit demon thing? does he like being pet like a normal cat? how does he usually interact with the others when they are just chilling at the black cat headquarters? just some questions ive been wondering while trying to figure out what to do with him for my fanfic. worst case scenario i could just leave him out for the summer themed one by coming up with some excuse for his abscence(he got fleas somehow and had to go to the vet... being kinda silly here but could be funny) id imagine hes not really like a normal cat, so in all seriousness he probably doesn't have to worry about fleas. and we've seen from the true ending he should actually be pretty strong/competent to help the others out, its just hard to imagine him being a goof, granted i haven't played the remake in awhile but i don't seem to recall him really showing up too much throughout the story so i just wish i had more context about what he is like as a character to go off of. also gonna have to come up with an excuse for why Takeru can't come along with them for the demon excorsing mission in the mountains that happens in the prequel part before the summer story, i was thinking for that i could even just use something silly like she got food poisoning from a chinese food restaraunt or had to work at a part time job at a convenience store to help cover the rent since they haven't had much work since the nightmare incident at the school.

Takeru will show up in the summer story but granted that should hopefully just be a smaller work with just one h-scene with Sui(i am planning on having a fanservice scene with Sui dropping her icecream and takeru and her sharing an icecream cone together while other people at the beach stare at takeru jealously.) as for how i want to write the characters,ive been struggling to figure that out as well, but ill probably just go for my initial plan, as silly as it may be. the only thing with having Sui x mikoto x yamato as a ship is that i realise how ridiculous that is and for obvious reasons i don't think that kinda relationship would work in real life, obviously its a work of fiction so yeah I want to ultimately write what id like to see even if its a bit self indulgent, just that it could come at the cost of the quality of the writing. well with how ridiculous the world of inyouchuu is its not the most far fetched thing for the series, and if anything after all the crap sui and the others go through its no wonder if they end up becoming a bit corrupted/perverted/weird or super horny given all the run ins with horny demons and what not. i think if anything having a little bit of drama or arguments between the three every now and then and trying to tackle how one would try to make a relationship with three people work could be interesting to write i guess, at the same time i do want the story to not be super heavy or dramatic relationship-wise, so id like to think most of the time they manage to get along pretty well. this also makes them all bi(except for yamato probably) in my head canon, which honestly doesn't seem too far fetched to me. but the other problem is this does kinda leave Takeru in the dust. and thinking about it, as i was first going through Suis route(wait maybe it was more in takerus route? i forget now) i was actually thinking that sui x takeru would be cute together, the way they first meet is cute with Sui being the only one in the class who can detect takerus presence and Sui being able to sense her spiritual power or whatnot, being drawn to her and looking up to her as almost like a role model or older sister. her fascination with Takeru and the way she ends up inadvertently following her around a bit trying to figure out whats different about her was quite cute. so Sui x Takeru could be another cute ship. if i wanted to make the relationships even more confusing maybe Sui x Takeru could also be a thing at the same time XD. not sure how that would work yet though lol.

After that if i finish the summer and prequel fanfic id like to do a winter one(i know thinking of ideas for 3 when i haven't finished a single story is a bit ridiculous... my mind started with the winter themed one but then somehow i came up with the idea for the prequel one set shortly after the events of the first game) with the winter one being set in the world of mushihimesama(stage 2 is an ice themed stage, expect some snowball fights, hot cocoa, and hopefully a giant cuttlefish with tentacles h-scene) I wouldn't have to worry as much about the Inyouchuu world/lore, though i probably will bring yoru into that one as well since he could fight alongside the others at least, he might be left behind for the prequel though since thats already a lot of characters with Palm, Reco, and their trusty companions with them(they have levisense so they could fight too, its kinda like esper abilities i think?- basically an excuse in the world of mushihimesama for why the bugs and dragons can shoot colourful bullets and whatnot) The idea is to have a lot of H-scenes, fights, and story in the prequel story, keep the summer story which im writing first simple with just 1 H-scene and a simple story, no demons or tentacles or anything, just a chill slice of life story, and then the final winter part would be longer then the summer part but simpler then the prequel part, existing more for some cute moments and h-scenes, with not a lot of plot going on(if the conflict with Queen Larsa isn't resolved in the first part, maybe there is a short joke/karma ending for her where she ends up in the world of Inyouchuu again having to deal with the tentacles and somehow gets done in by them, not sure how much of Queen Larsa to have in the prequel story since im also planning on having a demonic tengu as the main antagonist for that part)

For the prequel part I do want to do some bad ends, and while im not a fan of guro it is pretty much par for the course with this series so i might still have some pretty violent endings in there, probably just a few bad ends though. the bad ends will probably have some pregnancy/birthing giant demon bugs too since that also kinda seems to be a big part of the series, if anything i think having these bad ends does make getting the true ending more serious though while doing a good job of showing how hopeless the situation is and making the villian seem that much more intimidating. ill probably go with the enemies still making the others feel good during the disturbing h-scenes, although that was kinda nightmares thing I assumed(using lust and despair as negative emotions to take over the entire school) but is that what most demons do when they are trying to get girls to birth their babies? so yeah not entirely sure if thats how it usually goes, but one thing that makes some of those scenes hot is that the girls usually end up enjoying it at least after awhile. Another thing is id like to have some H-scenes that end with the enemy being defeated somehow and the main story continuing like normal, but by doing that i dunno what effect that would have on the characters, maybe they start to become more degenerate as a result of all the tentacle sex that they go through while being made to watch each other lol. maybe there are even some unsuspecting hikers in the mountains that end up seeing them while they are struggling with whatever tentacles/monsters (i find public humiliation/whatever its called again really hot so I gotta have at least a few moments like that in it) but i also want to do some research on tengu and whatnot so that there is actually some plot here, and figure out how the fights will go/end. anyways its because its much more complex that i kinda want to start with the simpler summer story first.

The basic idea i had for it is Mikoto and the others have a request to investigate the reported dissapearances of several hikers deep in the nearby mountains, and Takeru and Yoru are out of action for whatever reason leaving Sui, Mikoto and Yamato to go investigate. something happens and Sui somehow ends up using her powers to summon help from another world(okay maybe i need to plan that out a bit more so it makes more sense if i can) Reco and Palm show up and with Reco being a goddess of sorts already by futari?(not really sure exactly what that changes about her from before fighting Aki but maybe like Sui and Takeru she has strong spiritual powers?) however while the rift between worlds is open in another part of the mountain Larsa and the stage 4 spider midboss and some other enemies from futari possibly also get through. I want to have some kinda item that grants someone their desires, maybe it got lost deep in a cave in the mountains(that turns out to just be a giant sentient demon with lots of bio-cave goodness inside?) and the tengu is after it for his own nefarious gain, maybe queen larsa can also sense it cause of the spiritual energy flowing from it so the two of them would both be after it for their own gain, and ultimately sui and the others have to stop them from retrieving it. I also wanted to have it set in fall but because its supposed to take place before the summer story that wouldn't make sense, so instead i figure maybe the setting is in spring but the area by the mountain is stuck in fall for some reason(something to do with previous desire of person who last had the mystical item - and maybe something to do with some weakness that the Tengu has or something? id like to think someone had found the item and made one last wish with their desire for the future before dying. This also gives me an excuse for a scene where a horny Palm or Yamato desire to see the girls in bunny outfits leading to some orgy scene with everyone? could be a joke end or part of the good ending, not sure yet lol) anyways all this time i spent typing up my plans when i could have been working on it more... at least i got a bit more written today but they still aren't at the beach quite yet lol. and sorry for the wall of text, if only i could put that towards my writing instead whoops

(06-21-2026, 06:04 PM)lonesomebro Wrote:

(06-21-2026, 05:39 PM)Suiisbestgirl Wrote:

(06-21-2026, 01:38 PM)lonesomebro Wrote: Decided to start writing a hentai fic. However, it’s based on Space Pirate Sara (it’ll be her and Sylvia and a whole tribe of the lizard men from the second episode), so it’s not very Inyouchuu-like beyond the belly bulging cocks, so I won’t post much about it beyond this.

I will say it amused me that in creating narrative context for the lizard gangbang, the smut fic with tags like All Holes Filled and Breeding Kink is also about anti-colonial freedom fighters.

yoooo! at least link it somewhere here where i can read it! Space pirate sara was probably one of the first hentai I ever saw(i remember the first one was 15 bishoujo hyouryuki, before that i had just seen some ecchi stuff like the kissxsis OVAs(still really hot) and Yamadas first time B gata H kei), back when i would watch anime on my PSP lol. I really liked the loli twins that grew dicks and started having fun with Sara and the other girl, and then i think later they got their revenge on them by doing stuff to them as well later on?

 also if you or Echelon V have any advice on writing smut scenes id really appreciate it, i guess i won't know how it goes until i try it, but im worried i won't be good at writing the H-scenes even though id like to have some in my inyouchuu fanfics.

I think EchelonV would have a little more input to give (even if it is considerably more extreme than what you're doing), but I'd say just start by looking at smut you liked and seeing how it's written there. That'll at least expand your variety of descriptions for sex.

I'll let you down now by letting you know my fic will not have futa (well, technically it does at the start when the lizard men first rescue/abduct Sara and Sylia because they still have dicks from the twin's meddling, but then the tribe will use their own drugs to reverse that transformation in favor of amplifying fertility)

I guess our knowledge of Yoru is a bit limited, though we're still awaiting some fan translations so it's entirely possible we'll learn more about him with the first game. I played with some silly bits in my own fic (most notably, when he's let through the Shunjuu demon barrier, he says he was getting worried there'd be "nyobody left to change my litter box!")

Oh man, we didn't make up a ship name for Mikoto x Yamato x Sui yet... I'm gonna have to do some brainstorming. Honestly, I could see it working. Both the girls love Yamato, and it feels like sometimes we get a bit of shiptease between the two of them too.

That fic with Takeru, Sui, and the ice cream sounds amazing, and really it'll be great to see all of these. I'm so glad we're starting to see more creative works in this fandom after so very long!

There's this resource that I put as my first bookmarked fic so I wouldn't lose track of it:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/955716

Short version, a large list of sexy reaction words for various situations, and some do's and dont's to avoid nullifying the eroticism with silliness

Granted, more than a bit of it isn't entirely relevant for some of the writing in this community, like the sex needing to be anatomically possible, or anal sex requiring any sort of responsible preparation.

It also recommends avoiding odd slang for genitals/cum/etc., which is a non-starter on this forum. Where would we be without chunky yogurt tar?

You guys really liked the chunky yogurt tar. Lol, not sure I can top it...

We just need to match it with equally chunky counterparts so it doesn't have to be alone.

(06-21-2026, 06:44 PM)Suiisbestgirl Wrote: i was actually thinking that sui x takeru would be cute together, the way they first meet is cute with Sui being the only one in the class who can detect takerus presence and Sui being able to sense her spiritual power or whatnot, being drawn to her and looking up to her as almost like a role model or older sister. her fascination with Takeru and the way she ends up inadvertently following her around a bit trying to figure out whats different about her was quite cute. so Sui x Takeru could be another cute ship.