General fanfic writing thread!

That last part, maybe I'll tuck it away for an idea someday myself heh.

I love loli but there's some really hot Aojiru milfs that would be nice to see more of. Kyoko (Rinko's mom), the blue head and brunette in Mouryou, and the mom in Kowaku, some of my favorites that come to mind. The blue haired chick got DP'd by that nasty orc looking human and the cool bug mummy, but it does seem rare the main demon bosses don't touch the milfs much. I do think it's hot to imagine more older hotties in the bio breeding caves somewhere... 

Lol here was my thread on this: https://inyouchuuverse.net/showthread.php?tid=30

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And some kind of backstory with Hatsune, Kyoko, and Momo seems like an official DLC they should have made by now. Would love that. If they ever hunted demons together like that. The OG Black Cat's!

BTW, who's Momo? I can't find that character very easily, the first thing I got trying to google search it was one of the lolis from the first game, and I'm pretty sure that's not who you're referring to.

And some kind of backstory with Hatsune, Kyoko, and Momo seems like an official DLC they should have made by now. Would love that. If they ever hunted demons together like that. The OG Black Cat's!

BTW, who's Momo? I can't find that character very easily, the first thing I got trying to google search it was one of the lolis from the first game, and I'm pretty sure that's not who you're referring to.

Oh it's her! It's just that, she's not a loli technically. lol  https://vndb.org/c60034

She's the school nurse in Inyouchuu 1 / Shin. Has an end game route unlock in the JAST/Shin release, a goofier gag thing with one scene and funny stuff. So in classic Inyouchuu fashion, I just assume the tiny loli-looking woman is maybe the strongest characters in the series. lmao, I have no idea if her, Kyoko, and Hatsune have history, but it's a cool idea in my head, if they were the original Black Cat's or something.

Maybe a bigger role in the Hanamaru's. "loosely" related to Kowaku no Toki's Momoko, I'm not sure, but the creator Hayami has mentioned he envisioned Kowaku and Inyouchuu were in the same world.

Hanamaru 1. lol

Inyouchuu Lover since ~2005~

And some kind of backstory with Hatsune, Kyoko, and Momo seems like an official DLC they should have made by now. Would love that. If they ever hunted demons together like that. The OG Black Cat's!

BTW, who's Momo? I can't find that character very easily, the first thing I got trying to google search it was one of the lolis from the first game, and I'm pretty sure that's not who you're referring to.

Oh it's her! It's just that, she's not a loli technically. lol  https://vndb.org/c60034

She's the school nurse in Inyouchuu 1 / Shin. Has an end game route unlock in the JAST/Shin release, a goofier gag thing with one scene and funny stuff. So in classic Inyouchuu fashion, I just assume the tiny loli-looking woman is maybe the strongest characters in the series. lmao, I have no idea if her, Kyoko, and Hatsune have history, but it's a cool idea in my head, if they were the original Black Cat's or something.

Maybe a bigger role in the Hanamaru's. "loosely" related to Kowaku no Toki's Momoko, I'm not sure, but the creator Hayami has mentioned he envisioned Kowaku and Inyouchuu were in the same world.

Hanamaru 1. lol

now i really need to see Hanamaru 2 come out in english! Momos joke ending in Shin Inyouchuu is one of my favourite parts of the game(if not partially for how unexpected it is after all the horror and despair) and now i really want to see more of Momo as shes a fun character!

 
oh this is her in Kowaku no Toki? doesn't she have that horrifying death in the anime? I really hope thats just a bad end in the VN and that there is an ending where she lives, although i guess the chances of that coming out in english are low anyways  not the eyeball scene... poor momo...

 not sure why they would skip the first Hanamaru though, that always bugs me, seen it happen with a few other games recently too, like Real Eroge Situation, they skipped the first game for some reason, not to mention they changed the name of the game real eroge situation 2 to real hentai situation 2 on JAST and real anime situation 2 on steam for some reason, i get the steam version would have been without the patch but they probably could have kept the name the same. and then there is the Role Player series by akabeisoft2, we are getting the second game of that( Cosplaying in Costalia: The Tororo Sisters!) but not the first game for some reason? I would type out the full original titles for the games but they are too long for me to remember fully XD. but im still gonna buy the second game again when it comes out in english since im sure its probably still decent(first game was better cause it had better L2D scenes from what i remember -in fact it might have had some of the best Live2D H-scenes that ive seen possibly) the third game also looks better then 2 from what i have played of it.

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First game:

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Second game:

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Third game:

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Also why is it that eroge/nukige sites tend to have really fun webpages? 
heres the one for the third role player game(NSFW obviously): https://www.akabeesoft2.com/products/roleplayer_ikura/index.html

and then theres also a bunch of other series we only got the later entries to, like gears of dragoon, im interested in playing it, but its actually the second game just that they removed the 2 in the west(which doesn't inspire confidence we will ever see 1 or 3 translated) and theres actually a bunch of other games connected to it that came out before the first gears of dragoon. another example would be Wayblazer Dammerung, its one of eushullys latest titles yet its the first one we got, but looking at it on VNDB it seems its actually a prequel to Kamidori Alchemy Meister so maybe they could still go back and release some of the older games someday(although it says kamidori alchemy meister is 120 hours long, so that might be a lot of text to translate)

oh this is her in Kowaku no Toki? doesn't she have that horrifying death in the anime? I really hope thats just a bad end in the VN and that there is an ending where she lives, although i guess the chances of that coming out in english are low anyways  not the eyeball scene... poor momo...

According to a reddit page, these are the three Momo endings in the game

Ending 1: After experiencing multiple sexual intercourses with Mushizo, Momoko has become so addicted to it. Her mind is broken, being a slave to sexual pleasure and she constantly goes to a public bathroom to have sex with multiple men. This is assisted by Kyousuke Mibu which he still has feelings for her
Ending 2: Kyousuke kills Mushizo with an axe and the mansion starts burning. Kyousuke and Momoko were able to escape and return back home, living their lives happily
Ending 3: Momoko ended up having all four of her limbs cut off. Parts of her flesh were being fed to Kyousuke without him realizing. When Kyousuke found out what was going on, he was able to save Momoko and escape the mansion as it was burning. But after that, Kyousuke finds himself waking up in his home where Momoko arrived all well as if nothing happened. He believed it was a dream all along.

So the Mind Break Ending, the Gets The Guy Ending, and the All Just A Dream? Ending

There are two other girls who also have three endings each.

oh this is her in Kowaku no Toki? doesn't she have that horrifying death in the anime? I really hope thats just a bad end in the VN and that there is an ending where she lives, although i guess the chances of that coming out in english are low anyways  not the eyeball scene... poor momo...

According to a reddit page, these are the three Momo endings in the game

Ending 1: After experiencing multiple sexual intercourses with Mushizo, Momoko has become so addicted to it. Her mind is broken, being a slave to sexual pleasure and she constantly goes to a public bathroom to have sex with multiple men. This is assisted by Kyousuke Mibu which he still has feelings for her
Ending 2: Kyousuke kills Mushizo with an axe and the mansion starts burning. Kyousuke and Momoko were able to escape and return back home, living their lives happily
Ending 3: Momoko ended up having all four of her limbs cut off. Parts of her flesh were being fed to Kyousuke without him realizing. When Kyousuke found out what was going on, he was able to save Momoko and escape the mansion as it was burning. But after that, Kyousuke finds himself waking up in his home where Momoko arrived all well as if nothing happened. He believed it was a dream all along.

So the Mind Break Ending, the Gets The Guy Ending, and the All Just A Dream? Ending

There are two other girls who also have three endings each.

oh interesting! thanks for the info. I watched the anime of it years ago which adapted the third ending i guess, though im not sure if they changed parts of it cause i don't remember him saving her and then waking up and finding Momoko safe in the anime adaptation. definitely the stuff with Kyousuke and the other girl eating parts of her flesh without realising it were so disturbing haha. they were like putting it in meat pies so they didn't realise... was definitely surprising for a PoRo anime which are usually pretty chill XD

Yeah I'll forever be shocked that PoRo went all the way with Kowaku no Toki basically. It's up there with Euphoria, or Bondage Games, for most fucked up hentai OVA. I for one love the bull scenes at least... wish Ai got that.

But yeah, I absolutely love Momoko's design, super hot and she looks great in ropes. Would love to see her get a cameo in Inyouchuu someday, like Yukino did in Inyouchuu Goku (treated as just a random girl enslaved to tentacles).

Might just have to do Momoko in a fanfic myself someday.

Then I think it was PoRo that did that lousy one episode of Kuraibito too? And it was so disappointing, vanilla, etc. Bummer.

I'm not quite sure why Hanamaru was skipped. I guess 2 is what Tinker Bell offered to JAST. That said, selfishly... this is way better, because Hanamaru 2's CG content is all hardcore Inyouchuu styled fun. I wrap it up with Shoku, Kowaku no Toki, and Mouryou no Nie, the content and quality is on par with those, it's got some serously fantastic scenes and a big cameo from Kikua, Ouka, and even Meioki/Nightmare! I wager it's not canon. But I think Hayami considered Hanamaru, Kowaku, and Inyouchuu to be one shared world.

Inyouchuu Lover since ~2005~

I never saw the full Kowaku OVA, but I do have one clip of it for sure, which you'll probably recognize immediately... that being a scene that includes Yukino biting through a wooden block from screaming so hard. And do recall she closely resembles a girl I liked in high school...lol oops

Really can't wait for HM2. It sounds amazing and also hilarious.

Yeah I'll forever be shocked that PoRo went all the way with Kowaku no Toki basically. It's up there with Euphoria, or Bondage Games, for most fucked up hentai OVA. I for one love the bull scenes at least... wish Ai got that.

But yeah, I absolutely love Momoko's design, super hot and she looks great in ropes. Would love to see her get a cameo in Inyouchuu someday, like Yukino did in Inyouchuu Goku (treated as just a random girl enslaved to tentacles).

Might just have to do Momoko in a fanfic myself someday.

Then I think it was PoRo that did that lousy one episode of Kuraibito too? And it was so disappointing, vanilla, etc. Bummer.

I'm not quite sure why Hanamaru was skipped. I guess 2 is what Tinker Bell offered to JAST. That said, selfishly... this is way better, because Hanamaru 2's CG content is all hardcore Inyouchuu styled fun. I wrap it up with Shoku, Kowaku no Toki, and Mouryou no Nie, the content and quality is on par with those, it's got some serously fantastic scenes and a big cameo from Kikua, Ouka, and even Meioki/Nightmare! I wager it's not canon. But I think Hayami considered Hanamaru, Kowaku, and Inyouchuu to be one shared world.

Maybe in your fanfic one of the demons captures Momoko, but her prior situation was so dire that being a demon's seedbed is still a vast improvement over being chopped up as literal meat (assume the demon "saved" her before she started getting amputated), so her reaction to her new situation is mostly positive, if in a mind-broken kind of way.

Fun idea.

I have toyed with "clean" arms removed in an RP awhile back once or two. And don't mind it in one of my favorite Mikoto scenes (with Gyuki, it's kind of subtle visually lol).

Love legs though, they stay on!

Intact Momoko would be best though. Saved from the barn to the biocave!

Inyouchuu Lover since ~2005~